It's funny how people can change.
Many times I've endured the same.
Good friends since we were kids.
Oblivious to the fact that it wasnt the same.
New souls change old.
No one see the pain i've showed.
And now I have no clue what to do.
Kindling flames lick my heart.
Incinerating all our brotherly love.
Love brought us close.
Love will tear us apart.
Humiliation is the worst teacher.
Instincts to just leave it alone.
My brain plots of ways to get my revenge!!!
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I can feel the pain you have...wow. The parting between best friends...bothers...can transcend to so many different levels, making this piece so relatable!! Great job!
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Wow. This is really good. =]
Im in love with the last stanza.
Incredibly amazing write. =] -
Its funny how when you need someone to change the cannot, but when you never want someone to, they do.
My favourite line is "Humiliation is the worst teacher" brilliant!
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hmmm i like the last line tee hee
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