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Thoughts more then poem [incom]

A step must be well distanced,
Each word must grow within your mind,
Before blossoming to your mouth.

An outstretched hand is a welcoming,
But welcomes aren't always friendly,
Are they?

Think before you act,
Take each step forward with thought,
But always remember...

Patience will win the war.

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Just thoughts. There is too much on my mind to finish a poem with so I will make a poem of this at some point.

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  • Sometimes confusion can be its own poem. Uncertainty and bad form sometimes create something beautiful. That's what I think you've got here.