Creeping stealthy through the balmy night.
Moving smoothly, invisible from sight.
Climbing up and up to the fifth story.
My prize laying there in all its glory.
On this very night I will steal my treasure.
And gain with all I desire for my pleasure.
I walk to the bed wearing my usual attire.
A black thong, stilettos, I am on fire.
Grasping the family jewels, licking my lips.
He lifts me to his face, holding both hips.
Now for the real loot, I'm all wet, slick.
Bend me over, slide in hard, long and thick.
Throughout the night, you take my booty.
But really the Cat Burglar, stole the booty.
A contest entry
- COME ONE COME ALL ADULT/EROTIC WRITERS by Serenity-words.
1800 points, ended July 7, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Cuz this is awesome steamy & erotic
I have a few I write or I should say
post....you know how to get the fellows
going with lil theif.......later Eli
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Sexy sexy sexy...
You have no Idea how much I loved this.
~Serenity -
VERY STEAMY
This is a very steamy and erotic piece of poetry replete with images and allusions that lend credence to the theme on CAT BURGLAR.The wordage did really light up the scenery and replays the events on the reader's mind;through your mastery of words and invention of sceneries through allusions.If you ask me I would say you did a fantastic job.
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unique in content...picture really sets the tone for what follows...erotica in fine form here. thanks for sharing...good luck with the contest. peace and light, kp
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thats one of the most interesting poems i have ever read. -
Must be nice, either way you get the prize [booty]. Delicious image you painted here, and a victimless crime if there ever was one. Calling all victims, leave your windows open tonight, hahahahaha!
Good thing you are an adult, or I'd have to spank you for this one, my daughter. But I still enjoy it...
Brazos
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rearing to go
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Holy smokers! :p
This is H.O.T.T.!! You thief! you stole my 'calm' l.o.l.! i'm all heated up now lady! l.o.l. excellent sensual gem!
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Love the scenario as it is creative genious and the poem was completely delicious. You should be proud of this particular gem or perhaps diamond, either way the cat burglar got ALL the booty! Good luck in the contest.
Ted E
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naughty...
mysteriously wicked and sensual.
A most provocative piece with a
dark tone of intrigue and adventure.
Very sexy. Nice job sweetheart
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Although erotic writing is not my forte, the imagery in this is wonderful. I like the flow and the rhyme of the piece too. This is short, yet you have put me in the scene with the words of your piece here. Very well done indeed.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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OkkkaaaaYYy!
I really like this sis 
U know Im all for this kind of hype
Gre8t imagery as well
Loved it
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Well here I see two burglar's one with the booty and the other one after the booty. Very vivid picure you have painted. One that's bordered with flames of fire...this is hot!!!......and excellent erotic piece........write on...I like to read more...novy
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Thanks
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haha..thats a nice ass, and a bad ass poem.
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Thanks
Glad you like it.
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