I do not see but only feel,
the gentle breeze upon my face.
I feel my dreams go drifting by,
another time another place.
It gently blows from distant shores,
this zephyr traveling from afar.
Whispering wind keep echoing,
give me strength in what you are.
Come stir the waves, make them swell,
unfurl your might upon the shore.
Lord, come let your love overpower me
let me feel like never before.
Bring on the storm, make clouds roll by,
whisper softly in the breeze.
You do not change when darkness falls,
remains the same, notion perceives.
Mighty swirls, nature comes on strong,
a tempest anticipated.
Its presence felt in many ways,
in mighty wind God has created.
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Beautiful
I love the imagery you have brought to mind with your words. Very good flow and as always a joy to read. The picture was beautiful.
Thanks for sharing
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Lovely Comment
Hello, Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. It is so appreciated. Take care, Sandy
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Lovely take on the picture prompt. The images the reader holds in mind is the presence of peaceful wind that waits to show that a might which is fearful to those watching from a quiet beach. Rhyme is done nicely and carries the reader through the stanza with free flowing thoughts
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Thank You Dan
Good morning to you. I hope you had a wonderful Fathers Day. I so enjoy when you stop by and read.
. I appreciate this lovely comment. Hugs and Smiles dear friend. Sandy
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Such a beautiful picture you have with this write.
The whole poem is wonderful...filled with imagery.
I esp like you first verse.
Beautifully worded...with a lovely flow.
Very well done.
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Good Morning
So wonderful to hear from you. Thank you for reading and leaving a lovely comment. Have a beautiful day. Hugs and Smiles, Sandy
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Such beautiful imagery.
I really liked this.
You are an amazing writer.
keep it up mom.
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Good Morning Marrisa
So nice to hear from you sweet daughter. Thank you for the nice comment. You have a nice day. Blessings to you. Mom
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