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Tempis Fugit

Time flies with every breath,
Every heartbeat, every thought.
Time flies with every walk,
Every look around.
Time is constantly moving.
As time moves on, people realize that time is running out.
And as our time runs on, we have less and less of it.
We must Take back our time, before it ticks away from us, and we have nothing left!

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  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    June 20, 2009
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    Hm, that was ok. I was expecting a lot more.


    • Aquario.N.Solaris
      June 20, 2009
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      I know, I don't have a lot on the subject of time.
      i would've started quoted Linkin Park, but you would have had me on plaigerism.

  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    June 20, 2009
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    Excuse me. Please just change the Title.


  • drunken-angel4532
    June 17, 2009

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    Very well written! I think my fav part is the first line because it's true. And alot of people don't realise how fast it flies. Great write. Good luck in the contest!

  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    June 17, 2009
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    Please use the prompt as the title. I'll be back.

  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    June 17, 2009
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    27. Time is ticking.

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