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Love Is Thicker Than Blood

As I take your hand I can't help but hear the whisper of fear breathing down my neck
The path you lead me down,slowly killing me with each step taken has me trembling
As You smile in the darkness you whisper "Don't worry nothing will hurt you,I swear"
I feel the tightening of your hands and I tremble more dreading the once spoken words
The absense of your hand in mine takes me by surprise as they trace my quivering lips
Suddenly my lips have the sensation of your lips on mine and the feeling of shock leaves
The feeling of passion covers us both and your hand trace the outline of my face
Your finger tips leaving a hot trail where they once wandered I begin to whimper as
My fragile mind starts to panic realizing my panic in the darkness you whisper
"I love you" those words have never been so poisionous to me I let those words sink in
Killing my wall of protection then I find the perfect words to say " I love you too"
As I sink further and further into this moment suddenly my body feels weightless  I smile as you begin uncovering my flaws, the little self infliced scars on my body, The little imperfections that have let me down so many times. Yet as I name them imperfections you name them "perfection" I let your lips leave bruies of passion. My hands suddenly
becoming hungry and curious they long to uncover your own fragileness and imperfections as we lay in darkness in scilence we can hear our heart beats faster and faster we lay unclothed breathing heavily as our lips meet darkness and passion surrounds us. As our hands and lips explore I give in to you as our hearts beat rapidly we meet eachother's gaze and it was time to grow as one to become more than just "brother and sister" as I feel the the pain of you inside me I smile at you because I know that this pain is nothing more than a mere obstacle that I can overcome as we become one,I close my eyes and whisper "this is real,this is real" as our engery declines I become full of love and passion as we lay there motionless I stroke your cheek and kiss your lips and whisper those three words that lay pernament between us "I love you" As I close my eyes and excersion a smile comes across my face as I realize how cose my true love is to me...more close than anyone could ever be no matter if it is incestual love is love....no one can take that from us.

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