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Friend in the Stars

Look to the stars and find comfort there;
And watch their shine illuminate the midnight sky.
Each twinkling star above holds a prayer,
Hoping that they remind you that she's nearby.

Like the stars that glow so bright,
She will be watching over you
Every day and every night
Making sure you can get through.

You can't always see the stars above
But they're always there during the day.
Just like  Niki and her love,
In your heart she'll always stay.

If you ever feel like emptiness has grown
In your heart making it feel hollow inside;
Remember that you are never alone
And Niki will always be by your side.


Author notes

Dedicated to Dan & Niki

Thank you for re-opening the contest and allowing me to enter. I'm sorry for your loss and I hope these words provide some comfort, however small it may be.

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  • Swintha
    June 18

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    Oh Ashy this is beautiful poem, just like you! The title made me want to read it, in the hope that it would fill me with emotional warmth, and it did. I loved the simplicity of your structure and the familar style you have. Keep writing more beautiful poems ashy!!!
    Love Swintha