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Which way should I take?




I have one decision I have to make
Only one with no turning backs
I either fallow my heart
With someone doesn’t like me
Or fallow my soul
With someone who really wants me around
In either ways I will be the same
But only happiness is what I don’t know
In which way am I going to find it?
Which way would be more interesting?
Which way will be a total pain?
In which way is the destiny?
Am I going to be able to forget sadness?
And where would I find happiness?
Now that I made my choice
I will fallow my soul
And live with who wants me
What will happen to me,
Will remain a MYSTERY

Author notes

the narrator cant decide between whom to love and whom to leave

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  • hamza23
    June 24
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    thanx Sentimentalpoet i appreciate ur comment

    may god bless u and all our bros and sis

  • Lovely

    Its a great poem hamza . good job. may god bless you.

  • hamza23
    June 21
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    thank u for ur comment

    yeah i just noticed the mistake,, but as u said the spell check did not show me that i was wrong in the spelling

  • piccola silver member
    June 20

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    Nice job and thank you very much for entering. Did you mean follow your heart? you have fallow and since both are words, spell check cannot discern which you mean.