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Weird Sagacity



Wicked way with words
Heated hearts held hostage
Illusionary illuminary
Talented technician
Electrically energized

Seriously stylistic
Throbbing thrilling tempo
Opposite of ordinary
Noble nonconformist
Exceptional enigmatic emoter





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If you, the reader, doubt the authenticity
of any of the nouns, adjectives and adverbs
employed above you haven't spent enough time
lost in the web of white stone's pages
or celebrating his birthday.



Happy birthday from Ms. Marvel!





Author notes

Originally posted in Ms. Marvel as an entry in the contest below---
but---zap---the whole account disappeared with the posts, et al.
Premonitions, premonitions!!!


A contest entry
HAPPY BIRTHDAY ~~ WHITE STONE~~June 17th closes June 18th by PassionsPromise. 950 points, ends June 18, 6 entries
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  • Jayde1
    August 12

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    awesome

    as always a fantastic piece....

    the flow is amazing and yet again

    i was sucked into a world i didnt wana leave

    images as always are incredable...

    this was penned beautifully


    well done to you


    Jayde


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      August 12
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      I tried to capture white stone
      in words, which is a challenge,
      for he is most uncapturable!!

      The repetition,
      the impact of the words
      I had hoped would indeed
      spell out w h i t e s t o n e.

      I am glad it interested you.
      The graphics were created
      for white stone's character,
      the lighting technician for
      "Whodunnit, the Interactive
      Mystery"---a collab of all the
      people who signed up for
      a part. It took us to 600+
      replies before we got it to
      some sort of an end---
      or hiatus!!

      M-C


  • davidb7869 silver member
    June 17
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    I knew this was going to be nice when reading the first line...very seggsy!!!


    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      June 18
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      Thank you, D.
      The subject ranges from
      gentle to outrageous,
      so I tried to convey that!

      M-C


  • arafura gold member
    June 17
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    Great work, poet! Good luck in the contest!


  • Denerica
    June 17
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    Always the clever, witty one...lol, nice birthday dedication. Blessings.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    June 17

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    A very witty piece of work here.
    Thanks for sharing the love, I like that about you.

    Peace, Timothy

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      June 18
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      Ah, Timothy, so good to see you here!!!!!!!!!!!!!
      Good to share the love, is it not?
      I had tried to post this as Ms. Marvel,
      a character in our Whodunnit, in which
      white stone created some great stuff,
      but had a disappearing problem.
      Thankfully, an errant line of code
      was unmasked as the culprit---but
      I thought it best to safeguard it here!!!

      Thank you,

      M-C


  • pixiestix gold member
    June 17

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    I love the first line...wicked way with words...so perfectly suited IMO.

    Wonderful way to send birthday wishes.

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      June 17

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      There was the W starting the name,
      and I just had to use it---the words
      wanting to jump from my brain!!!!
      Right, quite, fitting!


      • pixiestix gold member
        June 17
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        I was trying to do the same thing in my reply...lol..."wonderful way".

        Must get working on mine.


  • Yemassee gold member
    June 17

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    Ah it's his birthday, how cool. I'll pop over. This is a lovely tribute, and it's a known fact people like being called "opposite of ordinary 10 times more than they do, "odd." And if you don't believe me you can look it up on Wikipedia.

    Madam Pixiedoor's birthday is soon too. I really ought to be a pest that day.

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      June 17
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      I believe Wki---and it's always simpler than other sites
      and no pop-ups! Yes, when I got to O I avoided the
      three letter word for some more appropriate to the
      character!

      I thought her day was coming-- was looking in Betty. Found it!!


  • white stone
    June 17

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    the echo of deja...

    This vu is going:

    VU

    VU

    VU

    VU

    VU

     

    (it won't quit vuing)

     

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      June 17
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      Perhaps it has sonething to do
      with all your birthdays
      reappearing before your eyes--
      a bit like "Scrooge"---only
      you are a much more fun person
      than Scrooge!!!!!Super much!!!

    • Aesthete2000 gold member
      June 17
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      Oh, man! I just brought this here from the contest link,
      for my Ms. Marvel page just disappeared!

      When I set it up, I couldn't post anything,
      after getting the bare bones info on--
      kept geting the error page.

      So I started over---posted on it, set it all up
      and that is the one that disappeared.

      So I thought I'd best put it in Aesthete2000
      to keep it from flying off.

      And now it's doing strange things here, too?????


      • white stone
        June 17
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        hmmm... I think they may be cracking down on multiple accounts.

        • Aesthete2000 gold member
          June 17
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          I always said I'd never have more than one----but I thought the Ms. Marvel, because of the Whodunnit might be a fun thing!!!!

          Well, if it disappears from PP's contest, it is here now!!!

          Aha! I shall blame it all on the mystic magic of white stone~!!!!!!!!!!

          • white stone
            June 17
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            Interesting theory, although I believe it more likely that clones of J.F.K from a planet in the Dogon star system have abducted Ms. Marvel to clone her for stunningly brilliant mates to the 13 billion Kennedy brothers...

            • Aesthete2000 gold member
              June 17
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              A conspiracy theorist!

              Perhaps because I was just chatting with pixie,
              telling her about a visit from JFK to a relatively
              small city, just before the Wisconsin primary.
              I was at the back of the auditorium, but he
              seemed as close as the next row, like a TV closeup,
              so strong his charisma.

              Your theory is really extraordinary!!!!

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