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Horse Shoes

depression rinses through me
pulled by memories of eyes like the moon

sadness washes away other emotions
leaving my heart blank like the sand

hopelessness erodes at my smiles
caving in dreams of tomorrow

beautiful is not so much a word
but a memory
of that which I will never hold

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