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Blemished Ego



I am riding off the wall
    making circles
scratching with discolored patterns
  ~gruesome~
like an unsettled feeling...
..carrying sponges to clean
    the mirror again and again
  for more glances
of my beauty.

My body's curvature
fits perfectly with my conscience
  probably better than my compatibility
    with life.

  ~my boyfriend says
      take these fries..

  I smile. He frowns.

Just another day
of justifying my attitude...

  My ego is blemished
    maybe that's why
      'attractiveness' 
has multiple meanings for me.





 

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  • Vidia Fvae Xeiden
    July 23
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    Your long lost aunt says two thumbs up..

    (= i see youve been buisy writting while i was away.


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    June 17

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    This is a gorgeous take on the prompt; best of luck in the contest!

    ♥ Maria ♥


  • perfectsunset gold member
    June 17

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    Very wonderful take on the prompt.
    You delved into the reality of
    this disorder, and have done so,
    with much sentiment and what
    aches from within-- a blemished ego.

    Greatly conveyed..

    Best of luck & thanks for entering