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Windmill



~windmill~

suffocating mild breeze
    incantations of an antique hymn

  i walk and stop
    and look back

  ~continuity and sustainability~

that is all I am aiming for

    I  don't want proms
      I don't want first kisses
I don't ail for first bruises and cuts

  I just want life.

  I am sorry mother
      I can't come home


because all that awaits
    is a quiet coffin
      of yours
to kiss and cry.

~windmill~

  unfortunately, still alive.






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Prompt: I don't want to come home.

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  • Venugopal gold member
    June 16
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    very deep and expressive, all the best

  • so deeply profound and filled with expressive and emotional meaning. Thanks for sharing... Love and light, Lavender Butterfly... x