Do I look just right?
Is this dress the one I
should have on?
What is going to happen?
I don't want to do this,
but it is my son's wedding,
I have to be there for that.
I am scared to death of
what is going to happen...
I miss that face, that voice......
But damn, I am scared...
I hope everything goes ok........
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Oh what a day..........
ugh...... but wonderful at the same time
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Amazing Write !!!
Great write sis... Everything will work out the way it is suppose to, you'll see...
Lots of Love
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hmmm.... getting brave are we?
you sure do say a lot with this write my friend... (I miss that face, that voice)
okay, I'm hushing now... lol
I love this poem and I for one applaud you for writing it... you go girl!
love ya bunches,
Suzi
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I know my son just graduated, and the mere thought of him leaving really does not set well, but for now he's staying right here, hopefully forever. lol.
Great piece, I can relate on some small level. Much love, and all the best with your entry. 
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OK. Now that you have peaked my curiosity to a very high level, I need to know what is going on here. I need to know. Let me know.This grabbed a hold of me, from start to finish. You have the ability to do that, and so very well. This is a contest, and I don't know too much about them, but what I do know is great work when I see it, and this is good. Thank you for writing it.
John
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babes u looked just gorgeous and i know what youre on about here and its a damn good loved this poem all full of wonder and excitement mixed with a little fear very nice Nye piece of love to you always dearest friend
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a little bit of mystery in your words. That voice? Perhaps the X? Now you have me thinking. lol. But enjoy the wedding whatever.
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