Convince me
of the
existence of God.
I'll join
your fucking church.
Prove
your way of life
is the best way
to live.
I'll join your fucking church.
Convince me
that it's not
your status
your wallet
or the way
they call you
"Father".
I see your ego
it's the thing
pulsing
like the blood
in your veins
Prove to me
your beliefs aren't opinions
but legitiment thoughts
I just see this joke
the one you're not
telling
the one you don't see
the punch line
in.
I'll give you
an hour
a day
and the next
because I
gaurentee
I can
rebutal
all the
stupid things you're saying
If you can otherwise
I'll resist spitting
on that black book
you're holding
I'll respect that prophet
the one veiling your eyes.
Author notes
I feel sad and frustrated.
Comments
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Religion preaches unconditional love .. yet the only living proof I've seen comes from our dog friends!


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The erratic organization of this piece probably aids in the reflection of the anger you're trying to express here.
I'm wary to comment because I tend to stay away from pieces that are intentionally offensive. But I think it's an interesting social commentary, this piece.
Social Sciences have found that religion (no matter which) is the best form of moral education, that people who grow up in religious backgrounds tend to ( by some considerable percentage ) stay out of trouble more than others. So in that sense personally I have a respect for religion as useful.
However that doesn't excuse some peoples abuse of their so called beliefs.

