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Baring my Soul

Missing image
I brushed my teeth
shined up my head
wore Sunday suit
and tie of red

now let’s go dance
the night away
with music loud
so we can sway

dim candlelight
with roses, too
romantic night
for just us two.




Happy Birthday!!

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HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!

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  • islekine gold member
    October 10

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    LOL...

    another funny little quip...I somehow managed to miss...where HAVE I been? lol
    Thanks for sharing!
    Congrats again!

    and


    • aboomer silver member
      October 10
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      lol - another one I didn't realize was still posted!
      thanks islekine - glad you enjoyed.


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    July 7

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    This is pretty good, that picture looks geeky. LOL I think you deserved a better reward. Thank you for sharing.

    • aboomer silver member
      July 11
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      thank you so much for reading Shy Little Lamb and for your lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
      blessings/best wishes


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    June 19

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    Got to love him!! what a sweeties,
    you penned a very humorous write lol
    I am glad i stopped by

    Blessings

    Rend

    • aboomer silver member
      June 19
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      lol - thank you so much Rend - glad you enjoyed this.
      I was going to do an 'alien' type write, but this is what typed up....lolol


  • Poesing
    June 17
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    He's a real cutey pie, isn't he?
    Good job on the take.
    Happy Birthday Linda


    • aboomer silver member
      June 18
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      thank you so much Poesing for reading and your lovely comment.
      Glad you enjoyed
      best wishes


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    June 17

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    lmao

    You really did it girl... too funny
    and to dance,I can see reflections of me on his head... thank you for entering pens contest honoring me...good luck

    Linda


  • Denerica
    June 16

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    LOL didn't faze me that you picked this guy for her date, you space monkey...lol, you sure you didn't want him for your birthday date...LOL LOL Excellent write. Blessings.

    • aboomer silver member
      June 18
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      lol - thank you Denerica - glad you enjoyed.
      I SHOULD have done him as an alien, shouldn't I? didn't think of a space monkey! ...lol
      maybe I should 'think' and try and re-write this....

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 16

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    Rotflmao looks like someone I have seen before this is nuts best to you in the contest be well


    • aboomer silver member
      June 16
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      - thanks Starz - glad it made you laugh. yeah, I think we went to school with him, didn't we??

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