A fire began to rage
Hotter than my bath water
This damn box cutter
tears into my flesh
...it's your fault...
The scar it leaves will
be a permanent reminder
of you and what we had
to show I'll never be free
...it's your fault...
You should have never called
I had moved on with my life
and was doing fine without you
but you fucked things up
...it's all your fault...
Author notes
4. I saw the clouds forming tornadoes in the sky
The winter winds blew on lake Michigan that night
I carved your name into my arm
So i would remember you
Sometimes it hurts so bad i don't want to know what to say
--Kill Hannah, Scream
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Comments
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I can really relate to this. I love the repetition here as well... you made it work.
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