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Earplugs for the pessimism

Existence freezes us collectively,
secluding ourselves in perceptions of doubt.
Petrified as fossils desensitized,
we wonder to find ourselves
with no way out
from this semi visibility that keeps us lost,
keeping us narcotized.
We,
I guess,
are sometimes not maneuverable.
Dare I say,
we muzzle the words that come to comfort us
while nuzzling ones that uncomfortably perplex our distrusts.



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  • Jonathan ROBIN
    November 9
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    Distrust must rust draw gilt from guilt,
    uncertainty, tears when milk's spilt,
    are overcome when muzzles fall
    and speech proves golden to recall
    life, when true lived to the hilt,
    hope's scope unfussed can cope with all.


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  • Paul B
    June 23

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    Its' good Wendy, but I don't like the word "narcotized". If that was changed it would be great!

    Paul


  • neurosine gold member
    June 21

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    This is why people stay individuals. Interdependence always carries a price tag. It's difficult for people to understand that when someone says fuck you I don't need your help, it doesn't mean that they don't love them.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 16

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    EXCELLENT!!

    wow, this is thought provoking, and very engaging my friend! you haven't done anything but get better!!! welcome back, i'm so happy!