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[ i wish i had a family ]

i wish i had a family
one that really cares
one who's always there for me
and one who's love i share

it hurts me to see dad's
who hug their kids so tight
smile in appreciation
and love's them with all his might

or mom's in the mall with their daughter
buying matching dresses
giving make-up tips
as the daughter's age progresses

i would give anything for that
get rid of everything i own
just so i can have a family
who's love is always shown

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  • nice poem..
    i told u to come live wit me..
    miss ya


  • Desence
    June 21
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    gr8 poem chica... I feel u! I love ya sis...


  • lylaet
    June 16
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    This is a really sweet poem. expresses emotions, whether they are real or not! Good Job