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Get off my line!

Hey!

You!

Get off my line!

You better get off my line this instant!

Or I’ll… !

I’ll… !

GET OFF MY LINE
!

Hehehehe
!

Sure taught you a lesson
!

Ha!
!

What?!
!

Aww… Shit!
!

Not quite sure where to take this one, boys and girls-- I'd appreciate some help

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • tellymonster
    June 17

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    ...this is...interesting...not your typical style. But that in itself makes it good, that it's simplistic, which is not normal of you.

    ~!Telly!~