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Park Bench

He sat playing in the sandbox,

the warm sun upon his face

this child so sweet and innocent

seeking that which is real.

 

Standing to go pick flowers

he stumbles over the raised edge

of the sandbox where he almost falls

down on his little face.

 

The other children shun him

but I do not know why, 

so I approach as he picks the

flower that he will give someone.

 

I stand and watch a while, 

then he suddenly turns to me and

I see milky white eyes in a small 

face.

 

He's blind I realize, this child is

in eternal night, the look upon his

face is beautiful as he comes towards

me and sweetly hands me the flower.

 

Dead and dried up but he doesn't know

to him it is the most beautiful thing

in all the world, given with love something

that isn't within the human race.

 

Come sit with me I enquire, the most

beautiful smile crosses his face, taking 

my hand in innocent refrain we go and sit

upon the park bench once again.

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I don't know if this is what you were looking for but I gave it a shot It was a beautiful poem one worth rereading a time or two.

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  • BluesMan gold member
    July 30

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    I was looking for was what ever it stirred in you to write. There are no wrong poems in this contest. This is a great take on the prompt and represents well the spirit of the poem prompt. Children can be cruel when dealing with their less fortunate peers. Thank you for entering my contest.


  • trekkergirl
    July 14
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    nicely written. I do agree with you that we do tend to shun those that are different. Not necessarily in a good way either. Just because someone is different does not mean they are bad. This is a very well written work you have going on here. Thanks for sharing this. It is a write you should be proud of.

  • Interesting poem. It is sad... the way we treat each other. If only there was more kindness in the world.

     

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