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Positive Thoughts

If you look around
What do you see
I see beautiful colours
Blue, yellow and green

I inhale nature’s beauty
It makes me feel alive
It leaves me feeling breathless
I don’t want to die

Peace and harmony
That is the key
John Lennon
With you, I agree

Although it’s not love
That we all need
It’s simply
Nature’s beauty

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  • JToddUnderhill
    December 1
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    Ok....

    .... I suspect these three are from the same person who needs to read the rules once more


  • DeadlyTurnip
    October 17

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    I think this is a very calming poem, and I agree with what you're saying. Peace and beauty and nature, all are good answers to anything you can go through. Very pretty, and thank you for entering.

  • a good poem, aye nature's beauty can soothe any heart i think, with its colours shing in the eye of love.

  • Excellent.