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I've Tried

when you say you never loved me
that's when I say I do
and that's when you change your mind
all over again for me

but that's not how it is
this mirror is still shattered
the person staring at me, is something else
an empty shell, the only thing you let me keep

I try to forget
try to move on
my mind runs through our days together
and again, I've moved back the date

so, I've let the time go on
one day, one week, one month, now one year
I try to let go
I really did

by now, I've tried living without you
and it sucks
so good-bye
because, I'm stopping

Author notes

hmm, i wrote like 10 quotes and two popped out to me so I used them in this poem (the first stanza and the last), so how you like it

I plan to revise, what do you think?

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  • Wolfdog silver member
    August 6

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    Excellent

    Actually, I rather like it like it is. You seem to have expressed your thoughts quite clearly. Thank you for sharing this one with us.