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unattainable

 

 

 

 

 

I want to bend

           happiness to the shape
                       of your moonlit silhouette
then watch the night collapse
onto plump cherries

 

 

and if irony came in small,

    handmade bottles

I’d make humour dress you up

like a flower
and swarm you with bees

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but only because you seem
                                           to me

 

 

 

so incredibly unattainable

 

 

 

 

 

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  • PinkeyPromise
    June 22

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    i really like it the ending is amazeing and this poem really stuck out to me great write keep it up!

    ~Divine~


  • etoile
    June 16

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    haha I noticed that.. I thought to myself hmm haven't I already read that?

    but it worked well I like it.