Newborn one, you come to me,
like a mysterious ripple,
that breaks the smooth surface of a peaceful
pond.
Like a sudden rainstorm,
crashing with thunder and blinding with lightning;
not even a single drop before to herald the
coming onslaught.
Your cherubs' face attacks my banded heart
with a ferocity it was not made to bear.
Defence from such an assault is
laughable
loving you the only choice available.
Like the leaves of autumn, so has my heart
changed it's colors and fallen
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Aw, my. This is absolutly gorgeous! Such a lovely dedicated to your daughter, my sister's just had a baby girl. She's so cute!
I loved this!
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This is a very beautiful and warm poem, thanks for sharing a piece of your heart with us...I especially love the last lines, nicely written...
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