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Breathe in The Beauty

From the depths she'll rise,
glistening with diamond droplets,
her alluring melody; hypnotic.

Reaching out to you; calling,
with the voice of an angel
but the intensions of a demon.

Just a little further; one step
and you'll be in her porcelain arms,
breathing in the beauty of her world.

Author notes

Option Two: Supernatural.
It's about the Mermaid and how she drowns the sailors that fall/jump over board. I wrote it because you can take the story of the mermaid anywhere you like, and they're rather enchanting creatures.

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  • Short, but can i say sweet? Lol its out there now. Very good Kate. love Tam xo