I still feel your scarlet whispers
As they caress my mind
Making me gasp and moan
Fading memories that
once were when and never will be
as tears drown my heart
and silence breaks my soul
ambers of love; that never grow cold
I still see my hands touching your face
I hear you your loving words
and feel that tender embrace
lost in pains from the past
or is it dreams of madness
dancing across my soul
lost lovers insanity
running around my mind
this aching sadness as I drown in your
dark anger soaked words
feeling hopeless pains taking control
as life slips by like grains of sand
better to let go and taste the bitter darkness
A contest entry
- Already On My Favorites List by Ted E Bare.
400 points, ended October 17, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I feel the sadness in your heart as your pour it out in this poem. Awesome write
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A very heartfelt poem you have penned. I can relate so well. A pleasure to read your poetry. Take care, Sandy
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It is one of life's toughest things to do in the world; ending a relationship (especially when there are children involved). I'm not sure how things get away from us in our lives for we were happy one minute and then the next, like happiness was no longer permitted. I think many couples indure this, but only the strong and committed are successful in maintaining a bond. I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "Already On My Favorites."
Ted E
PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!
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