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We're All Mad Here.

"Your doomed to chase the Rabbit, Alice." Was what she'd said to me,
"Your doomed to chase him until half past three."
"And at half past three it will be time for Tea,"

But Teatime was never the same after I followed the hare,
When I had my life altering affair.
So when you see the Rabbit, proceed with care.

While the cat sits on my bedpost,
"Alice, oh Alice," would he boast.
"We're all Mad Here."

Author notes

After playing 'American McGee's Alice In Wonderland'.

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  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    June 16

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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Welcome to AllPoetry, poet!!! May you have lots of fun on here and if you have any questions, feel free to ask the greeters, to your right...
    I totally love Alice and this was excellent and I like the pic to boot!!!

    Blessed Be,
    Jeremy
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  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    June 16

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    I like this, though I'm not sure if it's because of the nursery-rhyme-like nature of it, or something else. The rhythm was a tad off in spots, but for the most part, you stayed on track. Well done & keep up the good work!

    Laura
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