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Lovers From The Abyss

Knife delves swiftly to the bone,
moonlight shines upon the glistening red sheen,
beautifully dripping downward,
warmth of the heated blood bewteen by breasts,
arousing pain brings moistness between my thighs.
my demons smell the darkness that exudes from me,
delightful invitations,
my tortured soul beckon them to me.
The attacks begin.
My body aches in anticipation.
Torn flesh,
vicious bites,
erotic excitement,
depths of pleasurable pain.
Both creatures thrust inside me,
consumed by both.
Claws rip me apart,
as my black heart is torn out.
My evil lovers ravish me,
screaming in pleasure,
this trio of blood lust from the abyss,
we have become one.
Pleasurable pain to cleanse a tortured soul,
my demonic lovers finish their intense attack.
I follow my blood thirsty entities into the abyss,
as this is my home.

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  • z etoile
    October 24
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    this poem is so dark great write!


  • Galaxy2
    September 12
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    Mysterious..
    enticing...
    sensuall....

    Kisses all over, honey!
    Galaxy2

  • Whew!

    VERY dark. VERY erotic. VERY well written.


  • rainboots
    June 23

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    Creepy and sexy. Never thought I would put those two together but that's what came to mine after reading this. Your imagery in this was simply beautiful. It flowed wonderfully. Keep penning.


  • Miss Macabre silver member
    June 16
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    Same poem as the last one...this one I'll remove. The other you should edit.

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