A fire within her, flames
and she'll dance to passion's beat
with Cupid's arrow she takes aim.
Don't you try this gal to tame
nor her fervour to defeat
a fire within her, flames.
Her affection's she proclaims
and her lovin's oh so sweet
with Cupid's arrow she takes aim.
Victoria's her name
Passion'sPromise her mystique
a fire within her, flames.
Warmth and desire does she claim
as you writhe within her heat
with Cupid's arrow she takes aim.
Queen of temptation she became
play her game, you'll get a treat
a fire within her, flames
with Cupid's arrow she takes aim.
Author notes
Happy Birthday 
http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/villanelle.html
In a list
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday to Me, Happy Birthday to me...Okay I have 2 1/2hours til then by PassionsPromise.
1050 points, ended June 25, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
Comments
-
This my dear is lovely..You followed rules and I love that as well..Although I did ask for FORM and you did the challenge and did it wonderfully, I will reward you so with points outside the contest...
For it seems.'s alot of people came with their heart and I love that as well.
But this one is worthy of a treat and a trip to the finalist list.
Welcome and thank you so.
Passions
-
i hope she feels as good/bad as i did yesterday lol when it was my birthday. then i can be happy walking the broken glass
-
-
it ended upi being the best...
thanks for commenting on this wonderful piece.
-
-
Excellent
What a great write. As always you use such a masterful expression of the form. Best of luck in the contest.
Adding your comment:
