Of Dreams and Treasures?
Of lost love letters?
Of hidden Secrets ot the past?
perhaps,
It could contain ones heart?
Maybe even. . . Magic spells or potions?
Could a trapped soul be found therein?
Maybe a genie. . .
Whom would echange your wishes for his freedom?
Maybe, just maybe though. . .
If you wished hard enough
You might find the Secret of Happiness and Love.
Of all the things that could be found therein. . .
I think BELIEF would be the most sought.
for
If the keys to obtaining it could be found.
That alone would be man's greatest treasure.
as
BELIEF is what makes one achieve his or her Dreams.
hence,
I'd hope to find my own BELIEFS locked therein
So that one could share them when found. .
Within the secret box.
dragonheart1
Author notes
prompt: an old box
Sometimes riches are not the best treasures to be found.
A contest entry
- An Old Box by azure85.
700 points, ended June 27, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What secrets woudl you hope to find?
Comments
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This poem is what I found in my treasure box today...Thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
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congrats on the HM. wishing on this secret box. thank you for sharing.
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Ah yes, the best secret treasure to find hidden away would be to find the secret of happiness and love! That is what we all are seeking! Well done! Pam
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WOW... this is simply... simply beautiful... O.O...
I wish you luck with your writing...
but,
with writing like this i dont believe you need any luck because something as beautiful as that is simply your own skill..
i could picture myself looking for the keys to unlock such a box, my mind bringing forth treasure and love... gold and riches... hopes and dreams... -
This is an amazing poem. So creative and deep. One of my favorites =)
Thank you for sharing this piece.
-Kati
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An excellent poem that has the best treasure of all within it. I enjoyed your poem very much, thank you so much!
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I think that this is a great poem I loved it from the first line to the last best to you in the contest be well
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Such an awesome poem. I love the way you tell what you might find inside. Material things inside would not be as wonderful as your beliefs. Hugs, Sam I Am
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Oh My~
Now this gets the Mind thinking Love the prompt and how You weaved many images around this~
Very true regarding statement in the AC~
Sometimes riches are not the best treasures-
after all - it is only material worth
There is much more~ that cannot be physically seen Woot
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
Best wishes in the contest
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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