Serenely she gazes
With youthful innocence
As nature feeds her soul
Yet unaware
She breathes in life
and exhales joy
Author notes
A wonderful picture! http://miss-deathwish.deviantart.com/art/n-126035581
A contest entry
- Quickie Now #40 by amaranthine lover.
1000 points, ended July 1, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The sweet innocence of youth and this picture is simple precious...children do breathe joy into our souls and your words are so soft and tender..should have won gold...
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Thanks my friend! The picture is just so wonderful the poem almost wrote itself.
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Lovely! The innocence of youth. Don't we all wish we could have that again!
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Thanks kiwi.
I wish I could! It would be heaven.
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How simple and beautiful!
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Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it and I had fun writing it.
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So Lovely My Friend!
How beautiful it is to inhale life and exhale joy! What a beautiful line. This was short and sweeet and a delight to read.
Hugs and Smiles. Sandy
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Thanks sandy. It was a short and sweet poem!
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Beautiful
Simply beautiful.
Makes me wish...
Good luck!
S.
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Thanks S! It was such a sweet picture.
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My Pleasure
You are welcome!
Good nyt.
Tc
S.
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Beautiful, simple, and sweet. Another wonderful piece of work you've shared Fader.
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Thanks Lagrimas!
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Very nice take on the prompt, very soft and sweet. Beautifully done.
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She looked like such a sweet little girl. So she needed a sweet poem. Thanks blue!
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Beautiful, you captured the essence of the prompt...mystic
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Thanks mystic! An adorable picture for sure!
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