lightening
cuts through the night
a childs cry
A contest entry
- Haiku - Tanka Challenge by ryno mcpherron.
620 points, ended June 16, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I see this ....I'm a odd one though I smiled...kudos
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well done
real haiku, what a pleasant change, grin! sorry, perhpas I spoke out of turn
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I'm with you. I am thinking that in order to host a haiku contest, one must first understand what a haiku is. Perhaps completing Myron's introduction course should be a pre-requisite.
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agree totally
kind of disgusted with the past few, not that I did not win, but the ones that do should mke sense, the tanka is different. Shit I have 67 poems in my contest to judge tomrow, it is going to be a very long haul. Naughty ku will be a bit more fun....
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