I cruise to Hawaii in a ship
The howling wind through my hair
The crashing water against the ship
And the scream of our ships engine
We land on the island
The sand was warm and the sun was hot
The water flows silently through the sand
We see lights so we investigate
Upon our arrival to the glow of lights
We hear music and it echoes though the air
In our sights we see two people
They dance fast and glide across the floor
We get on the floor as a lady grabs my hands
Rough she swings me around like a rag doll
Inexperience I let her swing me
Then I feel her hand on my wallet
Flames shoot from the deepest pits of hell
She stops and places her ruby red lips upon mine
She reaches in the back pocket of her shorts
I feel I sharp pain in my stomach
I cry loudly but for a moment she and I are alone
I collapse on the floor as my shirt turns red
She reaches in my pocket
And she steals my money
Author notes
Tadd heres another one I tried I hope you liked it
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Nice piece this one is up to you
Now and then I will leave one up to you to decide on for the book and this is an interesting write -
Hrm...wow. Very nicely done with strong imagery. Great descriptions as well. Great work.
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hehe i like it. its cool.
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im inpressed
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impressed by wat
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moonlight vampire
wow it sounded fun until u got stabbed but nice i think u should revenge lol -
Wow, this is incredible. It's got superb imagery and really good ideas!! Great work
keep going!!!
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Wow...this was different. I don't really understand it but it's pretty good.
~Kayla
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It basicly tells a story of how sometimes money is stronger than love or a good dance
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lol. Alright that makes sense I guess.
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What an image...this is a ver different poem for you i could almsot feel the wind in your hair at the beinning of the poem this was a well writen poem i throughly enjoyed it...much <3...scars.
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