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Here Tonight

This pain has died
You're all alone
here tonight

And every heart...
And every tear...
All have died,
here tonight

But you cant get over it
You're all alone here tonight
It broke your
heart
and killed you inside

This love has died
here tonight

And all the pain
wasted on this heart
It all has died
here tonight

Your all alone
here tonight

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  • darkangel-darksoul
    June 21

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    i love the way you have repeated the lines
    Your all alone
    here tonight'

    a very great write... good work.