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Happy Birthday to You

 

 

Happy Birthday to you is what I say

what a very  wonderful happy time

celebrate upon this fantastic day

which is why I do this little cute rhyme.

 

Here is the sweet little cake that I baked

just for you, with roses on top, my dear

with the candle all up top of it  staked

keep your lover ever so close and near.

 

Sprinkles, icing  is ever oh so yum,

this is my gift and hope that I give you

it may seem totally, completely dumb

but is the very best that I can do.

 

Happy Birthday, to you today my dear

the time has come to be so very near.

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This is an English(Shakespearean) Sonnet

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  • I already took the cake- just 'tween us, ok? Tighten your lines and you'll have a beauty- hope you don't mind my saying. Loved it- she gets extra care!

  • Aww see you did it and I love it...

    Thank you so much for entering.

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    (I aint sharing the cake)