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You're Finally Here

Butterflies flew between
our dialogues as my stomach
twisted uncomfortably.

Your warm hands played along
the contours of my face, and
I held my breath as if it could
make this moment last longer.

You smiled flawlessly, and
I gave shaky one in return. Your
fingers rubbed across my cheek, trying
to ease the cracks on my skin that
were left my 5 broken years alone.

My breath caught in my throat, and
oxygen burned there as I try to
feel something other than the numbness
I was confined to for so long before.

You were here; your fading silhouette
was solidly outlined with bold strokes.
Your whispers that I craved for were
mended from its wasted fragmented pieces
in my faulty memories.

I smiled to myself as I realised
that I was holding onto an angel,
and not a single bullet could shatter
the bulb of security that lighted
our shallow faces of doubt.

& you breathed gently,
"You're finally here."

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  • Fallen-Muse
    June 18

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    good

    Thank you so much.
    "My breath caught in my throat, and
    oxygen burned there as I try to
    feel something other than the numbness
    I was confined to for so long before."
    Beautiful words thanks for entering and good luck.

  • That second to last stanza- WHAT???!!! No one could think of that... So good- thanks, G

  • Oh how I know this feeling. I have it with the one I love even though we will never truely be together in the way I want. This was a well written and warm piece thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.

  • Indeed I found this piece warm...
    Thank you so much for such a lovely piece to be read ...I wish you the best in the contest.


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