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Like a vapor mist

I'm standing right in front of you.

Wondering if you are ever gonna notice me.

Do you even know that I'm alive?

I'm standing right in front of you!

And you don't even see me.

I'm calling out your name.

And you don't even hear me.

It's like I don't exist.

Like a vapor mist scattered by the air
I disappear cast a drift
like a mist I seem, not to exist.

And I wonder what it takes to get your attention.

The way I'm treated by you,
I may as well be a stranger passin' by.

I'm standin' in front of you.
I'm shoutin' out your name.
And, I just don't exist in your world!

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  • Superstarjod22
    June 15
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    I can feel the frustration through the writing. Emotional deep poem... fine work