My entire life has been a terrorist camp
I am an expert at hating, and destroying
I do not fuck around, I am old school
I will not discuss my problems with you
I'll give you a chance, but you've obviously
not spent much time in the desert, have you...
Please tell me what you think
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I'm guessing you're not talking about Jim Morrison time...either way...what does that have to do with threatening and possibly taking out a norm? I don't know. What is it about California that makes even hard asses sound off like wimps? Maybe the PC? Maybe you just get soft in the head. I dunno.
I think that when we're happy, it's just hard to be angry in a truly curt and proper way. -
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Wrong on all accounts. It's about killing my father, and burying him in the desert. Naturally, that will never happen. But if it did? The world would be a better place.
Now, I certainly don't poke my dick around in your business, and it would probably be a sign of respect and friendship if you didn't poke your dick around in mine.
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It's great to see you writing again!
It's been such a long time. You know what I really miss though? Those soft poems or the romantic ones. I'm a chica though so i guess it can't be helped. You going to write one soon? This one sounded angry like your last few. I could follow it a lot better than some of your others but I'm not sure of who the you is that you're talking about. It sounds more like a group that you're angry at and not a specific person. Oh well, I tried.
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Loved the opening line - great metaphor there. A powerful, intense piece of writing that shows why hate is such a destructive emotion....it only helps the "hater" to survive...nobody else, lol
~ Nicolette
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This really cheers me up!
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I do not fuck around, I am old school.
I will rip your fucking pointer off, and use it as
a lucky rabbit's foot
That was brilliant. An awesome poem that seeps hatred.
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Wow...
That was seriously powerful and twisted. I loved it. Very well done. ^^
~Nova
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