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Fire on Ice

I believe that this love will never die,
Promises that I will never make you cry.
But until when..
Until I start all over again??

We've been through moments of doubts and fears,
Still loving you through all of these years.
But until when..
Until this heart die from within??

I love you! I love you! I love you!
Everyday, my strength is you.
But until when..
Until when I bear this deadly sin??

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After nearly a year without writing, I'm glad that I come up with a poem that I've been waiting for a long time..Feel free to comment! Enjoy!

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • swf27texas
    June 15
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    Simplicity at its finest!Short and to the point