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Night Dance

Dancing in the shadows
Avoiding the light
Bare feet in the velvet grass
In and out of sight
Feeling her satin caresses
Embraced by Night
Gripped in the rhythm of darkness
Nothing else feels so right

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  • Raven of Iniquity
    June 15

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    Lovely...

    The imagery and feeling in this was really good. It was short and sweet and at the same time very involved. Well done.

    ~Nova


  • Superstarjod22
    June 15

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    WoW

    This is a wonderful piece of writing. I just love the whole dancing in shadows and avoiding light concept... sooo awesome! lol I honestly enjoy this poem. Nice work!