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all i ask

all i ask of you is time,
if i can have only one thing ,
it would be time with you,
i dont care what we do,
as long as im with you,

when im with you the sun shines oh so bright,
i hold on to these moments oh so tight,

all i ask is that you give me a chance,
to spend some time with you,

lets watch a movie,
or stare at the stars,
gaze at the clouds,
or just sit around,

all i ask is that it never ends,
all i ask is we stay friends,
all i ask is that this never ends.

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  • wolfwatcher
    June 16
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    the only thing Id watch out with this one is the repetitive lines. other than that, nicely done.