He who lies,
pathe's his own ending.
He who abuses a good heart,
deserves nothing.
He who thinks he holds power,
is dissillusional in the mind.
He who tries to weaken spirit,
will fight an unobtainable glory.
For I am spirit, and this spirit. .
Continue's to rise.
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this is a LOVELY piece, it oozes strength, and is very uplifiting.
i love the independence shown in 'He who thinks he holds power, is dissillusional in the mind', This poem is inspirational I wish everyone had the self worth to think like this because it's been needed in so many relationships i've seen .. deep, powerful write xx
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I really like this one! The way it was written definately has an Eastern flair to it. Reminds me of something you would come across in 'The Art Of War' or something relating to Taoism, etc.
Keep up the good work!
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I like this a lot. People try to do what they can to destroy you. This is strong for how short it is. SH
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This is very beautifully written. I can feel strength in this poem. My spirits were lifted. I enjoyed the read!!!
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AMAZING SIS!!!!
This poem speaks straight to my heart and you know that sis...This is how I feel about my ex, he has tried to break my spirit I like you say I continue to rise! -
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continue to rise little bro!!! x x x x
oh and check you out with the new pic lol x xx
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wow
this was an amazing
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red skittles gone
thankyuou for your comment will read some of yours when i have time x
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well ..GUILTY and a real good wake up for me thaks i needed that nice work powerfull and just. glenn
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VERY IMPRESSIVE
WISDOM in abundance here,,, for sure,,, again your strength is shown here,,, what a great read,,, will bookmark this one,,, for strength when I need it,,,lol,,, thanks for sharing,,,,,,MICHAEL
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This is awesome."he who tries to weaken spirit, will fight for an unobtainable glory." I love this. This poem certainly fits your name..
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What a deep thought:
"he who tries to weaken spirit,
will fight for an unobtainable glory."
Lovely words, nice - that's why you're spirit rising!
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From the heart
You may hold a man down by chains. Yet his spirit may grow even stronger.
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Great!
A short poem that packs a punch! I cannot say which line or stanza I liked the most, they all spoke loudly with deep meaning. I loved it! But again, I can't think of anything you have written that I didn't just love! Good Job! Good Write! You are a gifted poet my friend!...DeeDee
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OOOH ANOTHER LITTLE CHOMPER HUN OMG IM LOVING YOUR WORK RIGHT NOW YOU ROCK, DYA HEAR ME YOU BELIEVE IT YOU HAVE REAL TALENT I MEAN THAT KK HUGS ON THEIR WAY OVER T XX
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lovely piece
well written
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love this one so....
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lowell
again, thankyou, your words are beautifull.x x
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A positive piece ....
from a strong and determined writer.....
a call to arms.....
knowing which way is up and how to get there...
This was empowering...
Give em hell lass,
Liam
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