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a funny thing called love

love, is nothing but easy
love, is nothing but hard.
get my drift?
love makes you feel safe,
love makes you cry,
love makes you feel like the only person in the world who matters,
love can bring you down like a hammar pounding a nail.
love makes you sing,
love can crush your vocal cords making you speachless.
love can make feel like your not alone,
but love can make you feel all to yourself.
love is a funny thing,
love, is nothing but easy
love, is nothing but hard

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  • l8nightnurse
    June 15, 2009

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    This is very beautiful. It really does a good job of explaining how love can flip your world upside down, good and bad.