Butterfly (fly away - long enough to hope for
a new day)...
Blood-Angel - do you see me as you, as real... as
walking into
the ring - not as hard as gold - still hard enough
to sting. For ashes (if they were ashes) and glass to glass -
sing for a helpless heart. Vampire: do you have any hope?
Can you walk me to hell to see how I cope?
There is not much (Butterfly) that you can say... I've had my
evil silk and been stitched up for so long I start to look like
milk. Baby - Butterfly told me you're crazy. I thought 'maybe'
butterfly might fly...
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I'm sorry. I'm afraid I couldn't get into this poem. It seemed to me more as a list rather than a poem. Especially with "Blood -Angel". I'm confused as to how that even fit in. Also with the parentheses, I got even more lost....
Good luck in the contest, and thank you for entering.
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Dickhead.
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I prefer "bitch" but seriously, wtf?
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Why, are you a dog?
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wow it didn't tell me you replied or else I would have replied A LONG time ago. Lose the attitude. A judge didn't like your poem, poor poor you. It's not the end of the world.
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Yes, you're right.
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