I carve that word
into my side, believe
it makes me real
But when the razor
licks my skin
and I don't feel the sting
I know I'm not alive
at all—a molded
rotted thing
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A contest entry
- Blacker then the blackest black... by Miss Macabre.
700 points, ended June 16, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Tell Me Your Troubles by KatherineAnne.
550 points, ended July 8, 59 entries
Honorable mention
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nice work, dark yet imagery in so few words ... great work
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Wow. A great piece. Creative, short, yet so detailed. Great job on this piece =)
Thank you for entering and goodluck in the contest =)
-Kati -
The depth in something so brief. Loved it. Mind if I add it as a fav?
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Yes, I like dark...this short little piece speaks volumes with many shades of claret. REALLY nice!
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aww thats reely good
well done!
xx
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wow...dark and strong!
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Good. Like the imagery. Nice and dark, just like I wanted. Good luck to you!
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