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On the occasion of a new day...




I heard a song

like wind

gently rustling leaves

it was

the breath of living.






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  • Tqop
    June 23

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    Wonderful

    Wow! Ladies and gentleman: Introducing Olivia Transcending!
    Great job on this. I applaud this wonderful creation. I loved the way you described leaves swaying to the breath of living. Very original and great job. Thanks for sharing.

    Evemauy


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 16

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    SO LOVELY!!!!

    Oh my! this is one sound which is so beautiful, it always makes me smile and brings contentment my way. 's


    • Olivias Violin
      June 18
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      I was going to explain what prompted this little poem, but now I've forgotten, lol.

      How've you been?