One little kiss on your luscious lips
Toppled us onto the cool satin sheets
Shivering so passionately wild against one another
Our bodies created an earthquake of heat
Hands grazing over every inch of soft, smooth skin
Breathing feverishly against the base of our necks
To each and every beat of our racing hearts
One little kiss on your lustful lips
Chained my arms above my head and
Locked my legs around your rhythmic hips
With no intention of holding back
Stuttering words rolled into erotic moans
Provocative banter whispered from trembling motions
Gradually repeating itself back and forth; up and down
One little kiss on your lips
Drove me to the edge of my bed and back
Never leaving me with doubt or uncertainty
That you are my love, my seductive love
Author notes
If there is something you find that could make this poem better, feel free to give me your advice. I have never before written a piece like this, so please give me your honest opinions. This is actually not really about sex either, but simply hardcore making out. Aside from being my own words, it was slightly inspired by #2 photo.
Any Critics Are Appreciated!
Comments
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Great
Hello there, it has been a very long time since I've messaged you! How are things?
As for the poem...a very interesting write. Every line runs well, it's an easy read, and it conveys raw emotion so easily (especially that of intense passion). I believe this is the best one of your poems I have read to date
Anyway, well done on a superb write, continue writing this way! Message me back so we can catch up.
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Nicely one...is this a brag? or just unforgettable? The write itself is well written with so vivid metaphors......thank you for entering our contest...novy & brazos
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all i can say is, great job here.
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romanticly done
I loved it the way it is, great job capturing a sexual feeling. Tastefuly done
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