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Purgation

Locked away in the white floating clouds
A dream of reaching out to the heaven
To purge in the light of Divinity
Become the child newly born
No desire
No experience
No mired heart
No sins
Just a clear blue sky
A dove, wings spread
A meadow wide and green
A little white lamb



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  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    July 1

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    This poem is showing few symbols like dove, newly born child and white lamb. All of these symbols are associated with innocence.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    June 26

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    beautiful

    You create such a peaceful mood with your words. I can feel myself on that white cloud feeling so relaxed.
    If we could only feel as that newly born child. What a wonderful feeling it would be.

    Thank you for sharing your talent my friend. I enjoyed this tender poem.

    Jeannette