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vampire kisses

vampire kisses
vampire's delight
gives you immortal life
it shall not cease unless you feel the cold hard feel of silver steel

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might make it longer

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  • Allyson.Lashae.
    June 29

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    Short and sweet! I really liked it, it was a great write, I would like to see you make it longer, I think it could be great! Good luck and great job!


  • shay222
    June 28

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    I like it, but I want more. Im a fan of keeping it short and direct to the point but with this I just want to keep reading.


  • paper-rose
    June 24
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    Vampires bore me,
    Yet this poem does not,
    But a vampires life,
    Must be distaught.