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*~Chained~*

Chained and alone, I sit here in regret
for all those times you yelled I cannot forget..
I cannot break free, or escape the pain
as you keep bring me down, keep making me insane

Why do you act in all these ways?
through all the nights, and all the days?
Why did you lock me up? and throw away the key?
why cant you let me live and set me free...

Why am I a prioner, just left here to fume
locked away in this cell I call my bedroom?
I wish that you could see, and look into my eyes
and see all the hurt, and hear all my crys...

But that'll never happen for I underdstand now
I am just the prisoner, the one who must bow.
bow into your plans, and into your judgement
for I am nothing but a victim to your torment...

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for the dead travel fast
Written March 18th, 2004

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  • Lady Patricia
    August 31, 2004
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    HELL YEAH GOOD LUCK!!!!
    TRISH

  • LostParamour
    August 16, 2004
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    Thanks for entering my contest... Good luck!!! I'll make meaningful comments when I judge the poems... I'm just thanking everybody for entering right now...


  • sedatednomore
    April 9, 2004
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    This is a really good poem. Good luck in my contest. ROCK ON!


  • HisxGirl
    March 29, 2004
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    great great great awesome job!! never let anyone walk over you be strong and never give up! keep hope alive! Great job and goodluck in the contest! *aLi